Caroline totty- I liked the way you personify the wind in
the first line, I think that really sets the tone of Starry Night well. I also
thought the end of your poem was well written, when you connect the wind to the
imagination as if they are one in the same.
Sloan Warner- I thought the syntax of the short sentences
captured the mood of excitement held by the sailor. I also enjoyed the finally
rhyme of the poem I thought it finished the passage off nicely.
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