Sloan Warner - I like how you started the poem off with two questions because they made the reader really think about what was happening in the painting. I also enjoyed how you ended each stance with an exclamation mark; it was a nice dramatic addition that emphasized how fast-paced the scene was!
Brandon Castillo - I like how you set the tone of the poem right from the start and described how angry the disciples were at the Last Supper. I thought you translated the commotion going on in the painting into the poem very nicely with your use of the rhetorical questions and short sentences.
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