Maddie Wheeler - I really liked how you began and ended your poem 4 adjectives. The ones at the beginning contrast those at the end, the latter of which bringing about a peaceful tone. These adjectives open and close the essay very effectively.
Andrew Collins - The repeated rhyme scheme was very effective in making the poem flow. It sets the tone and rhythm for the piece very effectively. It also commands the attention of the reader, making the poem more interesting to read.
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